Always say WHY something has been done - why no make up, why is he one of the only characters we see early on? What impact does this have on the audience?
Sound - discuss it in more detail. What sounds do we hear? What music? What dialogue? If there's not much talk, why?
Add some more pics to support (and sound clips if possible)
You also need to think, what messages/meanings do these micro elements (sound/props/lighting etc.) create for the audience when combined.
You say it goes against GENERIC conventions in that it doesn't appear to be a comedy at the start. Why do you think this is?
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ReplyDeleteAlways say WHY something has been done - why no make up, why is he one of the only characters we see early on? What impact does this have on the audience?
Sound - discuss it in more detail. What sounds do we hear? What music? What dialogue? If there's not much talk, why?
Add some more pics to support (and sound clips if possible)
You also need to think, what messages/meanings do these micro elements (sound/props/lighting etc.) create for the audience when combined.
You say it goes against GENERIC conventions in that it doesn't appear to be a comedy at the start. Why do you think this is?
Currently a C+, nearly a B. You are capable of an A in this coursework.